Sorry if you read this before!
Many of you know....Since I have said this many times...
PK at New Beginnings elisnewbeginnings.blogspot.com encouraged me to pen a story for FF. I had been lurking for many years on her site, never believing I had much to say regarding this community. Honestly I never ever would have thought I could write something worth reading. It is quite a creative process! I have nothing but admiration for those of you who are true writers.
Please take the time to pop on New Beginnings and spend hours of pleasure reading FF stories through the years. While you are at it make sure you visit Cassie. PK is wonderfully creative. She channels Cassie and spins the most delightful romantic stories with panache and humor.
I wrote this story with much help from my many real life experiences. I was not spanked however. ;)
Without any more fanfare....here is the first part of :
Into The Alley.
The officer
finished taking her statement, once again asking her if
she was all right. “Yes
officer, I really am quite all right.”
“It’s just
that you are so tiny, and they were out of control crazy teenage boys.” he
said. “Besides the fact that you were
lying on the ground next to a running car had all of us concerned you were
knocked out or worse. They could have had a gun or knives.” He seemed compelled
to point out her many missteps to her husband. Once again he asked, “Why did
you disregard your safety so blatantly?”
Ellie looked
up at her husband of 24 years and committed herself to metaphorically nailing
the last nail in her coffin. “I just ran to save the boy they were hurting.”
she insisted, “I just reacted.”
“Ma’am,
there were two carloads of large angry testosterone filled boys- one crazy on
drugs, fighting in front of your house and you ran in the middle of that
fracas?” The policeman looked at her like she was senseless. Frankly she wasn’t sure she could or would
have changed the series of events. She just kind-of lost all coherent thought
when she heard their screaming. Of
course when the six foot angry boy put his arm around her neck, she quickly
grabbed his arm so she would not pass out. She did think! Her dander up seriously, she thought what if
my child was the one being beat-up?
Furiously
resuming her righteous position Ellie refused to concede the differing
consensus of her actions. Her husband noted her clear lack of remorse present
showing as an angry grimace on her face. Not realizing her husband’s perception
of her thought process; she thought hopefully there would always be a Good
Samaritan like her there for help in a similar situation… hmph! The officer
closed his notebook, once again asking if she needed to be checked over at the
hospital. She adamantly, if in a slightly exasperated voice stated, once again,
that she had not been touched.
Lance
specified “yet”- quietly, as he closed and locked the front door after the
officer. He reached for Ellie hugging her to him running his hand all over to
make sure she really wasn’t injured. “Is your neck ok?”
She
explained once again, “He couldn’t tighten his grip with my hands between his
arm and my neck, (even if his superior strength lifted her a foot off the
ground) so I am injury free.”
“Honey…”
“Yes Lance.”
“You went
into the alley.”
“No Lance
not really... It wasn’t the same thing,” she frantically reasoned with him. No
answer… except for him pulling a struggling Ellie over to the couch where she
found herself placed over his knees pants down, positioned vulnerably to
receive his discipline. (Damn empty house!)
Seconds later he began spanking her upturned bottom, after securing her
flailing legs. She barely had time to shout, no!...unfair!” Smack! Smack! Smack! Smack! Smack!
“Really”…he
muttered never missing a beat. “My darling wife thinks so little of her life
that she rushes into the most…smack! dangerous…smack! situation…smack! since
the alley incident…smack! smack! smack!smack! smack!
Owwwwww… you
are over reacting! “Stop this now I shouted!” Not a very smart comment since
it just proved his point about her
thoughtless action, and unleashed a flurry of spanks all over… including her
sit spots and thighs. Of course now she was getting mad, mentally she was
shouting, “I did the right thing!!! It is my conscience not yours!” Thrashing
around flinging her hand back to prevent any more spanks from landing, she
ignored the little voice in her head trying to filter through the emotional
melee.
Clasping her
hands across her back, he matter-of factly continued. Finally after making sure
she understood his opinion on the matter, he let her up. Even knowing her butt
would be a blazing red Lance sat her down on the couch. He walked over to the
bay window, just to give himself a bit of distance for a moment. He felt like
throwing up! She didn’t realize how many people called 911 frantic to get her
help from the out of control kid. It looked like someone was breaking her neck!
He closed his eyes against the heart rending image, feeling outraged at her
lack of self- preservation.
Behind him, Ellie angrily jumped right back up
furiously rubbing her bottom with tears flowing down her face. Hearing her jump
up Lance turned slowly and said quite firmly, "sit…back…down!"
Seething…
Ellie really thought about saying something vulgar and inappropriate to him.
Instead she channeled the feeling of her stinging butt to her brain and
carefully sat on the couch. “I knew what I was doing.” she gritted out.
“Oh Yea,
that came across clearly to everyone involved, my darling wife. Undoubtedly the
reason you needed to be rescued by one lone teenage boy and two squad cars was
clearly your remarkable handling of the situation.” He realized that she needed
to crane her neck as he paced his worry and frustration across the length of
the room. His six foot three frame was even more pronounced when he stood and
she was seated. Of course thinking about her tiny five foot three, one hundred
and twenty-five pound frame did nothing to assuage his aggravation for her
actions in total disregard to her safety.
He sat down across from his lovely wife on
their brown leather chair. Lance lovingly clasped both her hands in his. Normally
she loved this gesture; however it was clearly evident that his right hand was
quite a bit hotter than his left hand. That awareness just made her mad once
again! “I am fifty years old, Lance and
I thought that boy was dying!”
“Then you should have called the police."
he growled adamantly.
“I heard a
crazy loud bang then lots of screaming, thumping and shouting. It really looked
like a car accident when I looked out the window. So I ran out asking if they
needed an ambulance.”
“Of course the moment you realized that the
situation required the police you knowingly joined in the middle of a fight?”
Ellis was
feeling a little embarrassed, she angrily jumped up and yelled, “I am through
with this conversation! You just do not understand how I think!”
He raised
his eyebrow standing back up saying, “Maybe we were not finished with your
spanking tonight. Not being stupid Ellie lowered her somewhat shrieking voice
and sat slowly back down onto her flaming rear.
“Let’s
analyze your actions once you ran outside, explain what happened, Ellie?”
“I tried to
pull the crazed maniac off of the boy that was getting beat to a pulp.” I
shared softly.
“You were so
lucky that Jimmy Hansen was there to stop that drug induced young man from
clobbering you! There was enough blood splattered about without adding yours to
the mix.” Thank God Jimmy had the foresight to call the police when the first
car blocked them intending to do some major damage," he whispered, his
voice breaking at the end.
She began to
realize how stressed and worried Lance had been. Her heart pained her as she channeled his
pain, making her start to cry softly. She loved this man with all her heart;
she never wanted to cause him emotional pain. “Lance, I did realize I was out
of my element… that is why I got down on the ground honey.”
She tried to
placate him before he could start thinking again. “Maybe I should have called
the police first…”
“You think?”
He smiled just a fraction of his usual bright grin. “For goodness sake Ellie.”
he started again, “Even experienced police men and women call for back-up
before they enter a dangerous situation!” She scooted a safer distance on the
couch. He was still very upset. “Ellie what would you think if either of the
kids acted impulsively like you tonight?”
Man he was
pulling out the big guns now. Ellie knew she would be soooo upset with them.
She exclaimed righteously, face a flaming red. “I would tell them to call
911….and wait…ok; ok I get your point!”
Lance sat
down hugging her close. She turned my face into his shirt, loving the comfort
his scent never failed to give her. “I wanted to be mad at you for spanking me
just a little longer.” She stated as her
emotions returned to normal.
“You know
love; I do not enjoy spanking you like that.”
She kissed
him softly, “I know honey so you’ve said before. If you feel my pain like you
say, then you’re going to have a sore butt for a few days.” She giggled.
Lance looked
at her saying, “We need to re-visit the alley incident tomorrow. Ellie,
remember what I said would happen the next time you were to put your life in
danger?”
“Oh Lance
please, let’s let this be the end of the incident. I don’t want to go to bed with you still
angry about this.” She pleaded.
He calmly
told her that he wasn’t mad anymore just sad and determined nothing like this
would happen again. “Darling we will
worry about tomorrow later. We have a
teenage free home.” (Both kids were away on overnights) “I want and need a lot
of reassurance and connecting with you my loving wife.” He lifted her in his
arms… strong man that he is; they entered their bedroom and lovingly played the
night away, pushing all the unpleasant thoughts and worries to the back of
their minds.
~o0o~
Thanks for reading I will put up part 2 tomorrow.
Minelle
Very passionate, Minelle.
ReplyDeleteI like your characters very much. Lance is my favourite kind of male, large and tough, but soft and caring just under the surface. And OMG, the male - "lets analyze your actions". men :)
Ellie is a spunky little character as well.
It is a very believable story in that, as you said, these things happen all the time, and as a Mother myself, I know I would try to rescue a child. So quite a good setting.
Looking forward to Part 2.
Very nice :)
Yep that's what I say too. Unfortunately when you see what Ellie (me) did regarding the alley incident maybe you will understand his ire!
DeleteMINELLE!!
ReplyDeleteI asked you to put up your story so we can all read it, NOT to apologize for it or posting it! We're here because we *want* to read your stuff!
*mutters*
Sheesh.
What I like about your story is that I can identify with Ellie and even think she was "right" in what she did. She wasn't being immature or selfish or mean, the way a lot of spanking stories set up the spanking. And she is quite correct that everyone who has a child wishes someone would step in if that child is getting hurt.
Maybe Ellie needs a superhero secret identity. :)
You and Lillie are correcto mungo! I know those are not words.
DeleteCome back tomorrow and you'll see why he freaked.
Terrific story....will her back tomorrow for part 2!
ReplyDeletehugs abbt
Thanks for coming round again. :) I love the support.
DeleteMinelle,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the plugs and thanks for letting me include your stories in Fantasy Friday. I'm glad you are posting your stories here too. They definitely be on your blog as part of your body of work.
Big old hugs,
PK
If not for you.......Well the tech stuff is giving me the chills! However as I continue to keep Ana in stitches she has given me some good computer advice about tagging them.
DeleteI nearly cried with laughter last night. :D But you are a wonderful good sport about it all.
DeleteAnother thing you can do is to make a 'sticky' post (one that always stays at the top) with direct links to your story posts. Go to Kat-Sitting and look at the Reading Index. See how it's always at the top no matter what other stories I post? That's what I mean. That may be easier for you than tags/categories.
I am glad I can keep you laughing. First PK, than sunnygirl and now you all trying to help this computer illiterate. Oh and even ronnie tried to explain posting pics...You can see how well that worked.
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