Ana gets a spanking.....ya hay!! Everyone send her a blogland pillow! Her behind is going to suffer alongside of Audra's.
This is the conclusion to my FF story hosted by PK on New Beginnings.
I am so very lucky to have generous friends who put up with my crazy insecurities.
I asked
PK,
Sunny,
Ami and
Bas to read my story and offer their thoughts.
Ana was such a good sport and didn't even ask to approve my version of events....!!!
She always deserves a spanking.....! Right? You all have to agree!!
You can find part I
here.
Part II: The Train Shack Mystery
Minutes
later, I saw the guy walk out of the shack and down the hill.
Looking to
the kitchen, I listened to the girls arguing about the quiche recipe.
I quickly
walked to open the closet and pulled out my gym shoes. I hurriedly put them on
my feet and silently closed the door again.
Stopping
momentarily, I rubbed by butt to relieve some of the lingering sting.
“Hey guys,
I’m running next door to ask Mrs. Conrad a question about quiche, and pick up
the hat for John!”
I heard Ana
shout, “don’t be forever, we have tons to do today!”
“Okay Bossy
lady!” I quietly closed the door on Gina’s laughter, and Ana’s outraged….
“I am
not bossy….Just Right!”
I quickly
ran across the street and up the slightly graveled hill to the shack that
bordered the train tracks. The first thing I did was walk around the shack to
see if the ground was disturbed. I figured I would be able to tell if someone
dug a whole or buried something large.
I didn't see
anything strange yet, so I walked around to where the door was located. It had
a large padlock that had been cut off hanging from a latch.
My heart was
beating fast, but it was with excitement. I needed to go inside and see if
there were any clues for me to take apart.
I was just about to open the door when I felt like looking around. Down
the street the strange man was heading back. Yikes I thought I needed to get
back to the house without being seen. Dashing down the gravel and across the
street I ran up to Mrs. Conrad’s door. I rang the bell, while trying to control
my breathing. I watched as Mrs. Conrad peeked through the window. I felt guilty using Mrs. Conrad as my alibi
but I wasn't stupid.
“Hi Audra.
What can I do for you today, sweetie?” “Remember that quiche recipe you typed
out for us? Do you have another copy? I think we misplaced it. Oh and if you
are still willing to let John borrow the hat I can take that now.”
“Sure love,”
come on in and I’ll quickly print another copy.”
I enjoyed seeing Mrs. Conrad
her house always made me think about home. She was an artist and she lived life
to the fullest. Her outfits were always attractive and just a tiny bit edgy. I
walked through looking at all the artwork she had framed upon the walls. Many
of her grandkids also were artistic so she barely had free wall space. We chit
chatted then I quickly made my way back home.
The day
continued with us preparing to have our Murder Mystery party. I even managed a
nap. After John, Gina, Ana and I visited the police station; we ordered pizza
that night for dinner.
“I still
think that cop was pandering to me.” John seemed to grit his teeth after I
ground out my aggravation for the fifth time that night.
“Audra that
is crazy. He filled out the paperwork and even discussed how you need to stay
away from the area.”
“Now you are
humoring me! Do you think I am incapable of reading a situation accurately?”
His eyes widened again. He also began to frown, at my attitude. Just to remind
me of our morning incident, he gently rubbed my still tingly bottom from this
morning.
“Let’s just
finish and get a good night’s sleep, or do you need me to help you relax with a
stress relief spanking?”
“No,” I
almost shouted, “I am fine I lied.”
We wanted to have most of the preparation finished
so as to enjoy the day getting dressed up. The rest of the night was fraught
with tension, but we managed to get everything finished with minimal hair
pulling.
I could tell
John was wiped, and I felt guilty for being crazy and unreasonable. I
apologized and we laid on the couch falling asleep in each other’s arms.
I woke up
and decided I was wired so I reached over and started reading my book. I decided to change into my sweats for more
late night reading.
However as I
walked up the stairs to my room, I couldn’t stop thinking about the nut in the shack.
I went to my room and slipped into my sweats. Then I stood by the bathroom door
and looked into the darkened room that was Ana’s. I knew I was going to go spy
again. How crazy that I was more afraid sitting in the darkened house then
planning on walking over to the darkened shack by the tracks. Knowing she would
freak I still decided to tell Ana in case something bad happened. I’d take my
cell phone for safety.
Tip toeing
softly so the house stayed quiet, I gently shook her awake. “Ana, I’m going across
by the tracks to see what is going on with that nut case.”
“What!” She
whisper shrieked while swinging her legs from under the blankets.
“Are you out
of your mind?” She rubbed the sleep from her eyes with one hand, while using
the other as she grabbed some sweats lying on the floor near her bed.
“Wait, what
are you doing?” I put my hand up to slow her down.
“I am going
with you, to make sure you are safe.”
“That is
crazy; two of us will be harder to hide.”
“Well then
let’s not go at all.” Ana said calmly, as she reached under her bed for her
flip flops.
“If you are
coming with me, put tennis shoes on!”
“Don’t tell
me what to do, Audra! I run better with my flip flops than you do in your
tennis shoes.”
“Okay miss
stubborn.” I snorted quietly. “Now let’s make a plan. I was able to see some
things when I looked at the shack this morning.”
Ana came to
a full stop as we were walking out into the hall. “You know, If John and Gina
find out we will not sit down for days!” Absent mindedly she reached back to
rub her rear.
“I am not
too worried, John is sleeping like a baby, and if we hurry we can gather
information for the police so they can get this creep. I do not want to capture
him myself; I do not have a death wish!”
We tiptoed
silently out the door and across the darkened street. We had the moonlight and
one lone streetlamp as a guide.
For someone
reluctant to get in trouble Ana was certainly moving purposefully.
As we
approached the shack we walked around and found a blanket over a newly turned
up mound of dirt! I started to get nervous, “Ana lets quickly go inside and see
what is around, then go back home.” I grabbed her and tried to shield her with
my body in case someone was in the shack. However she was having none of that
and pushed herself to cover me. “Stop it I nearly shouted, I’m the one who
dragged you into this mess.”
“I should
have told Gina and John. I knew you were not thinking clearly through lack of
sleep.”
“She was
right, and my bottom was going to suffer, I just knew it!
“Let’s just
finish and find what we can, then go home…okay?”
The latch
was open, so we quietly stepped into the dank room of the shack. I used my cell
as a temporary flashlight. I swung it around looking for evidence.
In the
corner we saw a mound of something. We grabbed onto each other walking slowly
to get a closer look. It looked to be a large garbage bag with a ton of things
inside. My cell wasn’t the perfect light to peruse the contents of the bag but
we had to try something.
I whispered,
“I hope it isn’t body parts.” Ana looked at me and I could swear I saw her
blanche.
Picking up
an edge and separating the opening I shown my light inside, Jewelry and other
expensive looking things appeared as the light hit and reflected back at us.
Ana reached
in and pulled out a huge diamond ring. “Wow look at this.”
In that
moment of silence we took to look at what was before us, we heard shoes
scraping around outside.
Click! I
shut off my cell light. Both Ana and I sat holding hands and digging our nails
into each other’s palms in fright. We sat quickly and quietly in the corner
trying to hide in the darkness.
I dialed
John’s cell and hoped I would be able to whisper and let him realize where we
were.
Next we
heard another pair of shoes and quiet conversation.
“So you
buried our last stash, right?”
“Yes. I put a blanket over it since at night
it wouldn’t show.”
“I cannot
believe how much jewelry we robbed in this University town.”
Since they
were talking, I took a chance as John answered groggily. “John, it’s me Audra,
Ana and I are in danger by the tracks, call the police!”
Minutes
ticked by in an eternity of sweaty fright for Ana and I. Just when I thought my
legs were going to cramp, I heard the two men remark that a couple of people
were walking out of the house across the street. They quieted their voices, and
we heard them open the shack door.
Loud sirens
screamed close by as the men concurrently noticed us and realized that the
police were pulling up next to the shack.
The men ran
out and we heard shouts of “Stop or we will shoot,” being barked clearly!
After what
seemed a perpetually long time, it quieted outside, suddenly the shack door was
thrown open and John and Gina appeared.
We embraced
in relief, letting go of all our fear. After a few minutes of reassurance to
one another we walked outside. Unfortunately we needed to explain what we were
doing and what we found to the officers. They were not going easy on us. I
stiffened in anger, if one more officer commented on our stupidity I was going
to vomit or scream.
My mood must
have been conveyed to John since he leaned down and whispered into my ear. “You
are in enough trouble already, how long do you want to be sitting gingerly?”
Gulp, I
forgot about all of this having consequences for my bottom. I looked over at
Ana and Gina; they were walking hand and hand back to the house.
After a bit
longer we walked up to the house. “John I know you are mad but I really was
sure about the shack guy doing something illegal.”
“And you
thought that it was smart to act like a cop or detective on your own?!”
Cringing at his disbelief, I tried to mitigate my foolishness. “Nothing
happened honey.”
“What?” He spouted in irritation and incredulity, swatting my
behind hard. The spank propelled me quicker to the stairs. I stopped talking
for a tiny bit formulating my defense in my head. I certainly wasn’t looking
forward to another spanking on my slightly sore bottom.
As we
stepped onto the porch we both glanced in the window and saw Ana across Gina’s
knee getting her bottom blistered with a hairbrush. I was mesmerized for a
moment. She was kicking up a storm and reached back to cover her bare behind,
which had been reddened considerably. They had been at this a while. We quickly
realized as Gina restrained Ana’s kicking legs between hers, this was not for
our eyes and turned away allowing them privacy. She was still fighting
mightily!
“I feel so
bad for getting her in trouble I whispered.”
“She made
her own decision, to act irrationally. But she wouldn’t have been put in the
position without you acting idiotically.” He was giving me no lee way.
A bit later
Gina stuck her head out the front door saying, “we are going to bed, and the
living room is all yours.” Obviously she knew we saw.
I stood up
and we walked inside. We watched Gina and Ana walk up the stairs with their
arms around each other. Ana turned to me and smiled saying “Even though I was
framed….It will be okay Audra.” Gina nodded affirmatively, “we care Audra.”
What
transpired was by far the worst spanking I have ever received from John.
“Now John,” I began in a pleading tone.
“Do not even
say one word Audra.” His voice scarcely contained his anger. “But….”
“NO” he
almost shouted. “Enough trying to defend your dangerous actions.” I was
stalling, “but.” Then he stopped talking and He took my right arm while I tried
to bend my knees almost sitting on the floor. John began pulling me toward the
couch, he was too strong. I was fighting but it wasn’t making any difference.
He stopped and swatted me twice to insist I quit fighting. We reached the couch
and he sat and at the same time pulled me across his lap.
Smack! He
was spanking me hard, laying one swat after another on my clothed behind, and
barely giving me time to absorb the intensity. “You spanked me this morning!”
“Then why did you place yourself in danger?”
The surprise in his voice was enough to make me pause.
“No fair, I didn’t get hurt!” I just couldn’t
stop arguing.
Smack!
“Really that’s how you want to play this?” Don’t you remember my spanking you
for walking along the cornfield because of the danger?”
Then pulling down my sweats he concentrated on
spanking me on my panties. “Stop you cretin” I managed to shout between ouches.
He didn’t stop, not even slowing down. I was starting to get tired fighting his
strength.
Next, he
pulled the last barrier down to bare me. I thought my bottom and the backs of
my thighs would just burst into flames. I soon realized he was making sure he
laid the groundwork for me to take the hairbrush as the final installment! “I
am sorry,” I screamed finally meaning the words. I was vocal through the entire
ordeal. But in the end I was just sagging and pliant. He rubbed my red behind
while I calmed down. I couldn’t get any closer to John or him to me.
We fell
asleep in each other’s arms comforting each other through the rest of the
night.
When we woke early in the morning we talked some more.
“You know Gina
and Ana agreed to have us live here after we get married. I think maybe we
should move up the date! What do you think Audra?”
I snuggled
into his arms and said, it was the best Idea I had ever heard. “Maybe I
wouldn’t need crazed serial killer books to keep me company during the long
nights after all.” I sighed mumbling my words into his neck.
The morning
found Ana and I doing everything we could to avoid sitting down. However it was
apparent that Ana and Gina were attached at the hip and John and I couldn’t
stop making contact. As we shared breakfast we received a phone call from the
police. They informed us it was possible that every robbery victim would
receive their cherished jewelry soon.
The murder
mystery party was a grand success and even though Ana and I still sat gingerly......
Love was the biggest victor, that night.
